18 February 2014

Music Audio Stories

Are your little ones, having problems being inventive or your children with vision disabilities, struggling with great amusement, because they lack the right tool?

Recent research into human development has proven that parents truly are their children's first teachers. What parents do, or don't do, has a lasting impact on their child's reading skill and literacy. But many parents haven't yet known their ways round the most vital opportunities to motivating their children's imaginative skills as they grow and experience the world.




Music Audio Stories can help your children stimulate their productive senses and give the ones with impaired vision the fun that is crucial to their growth at a lower cost. That is what we guarantee.

Our stories are a great way to allow children to use their own imagination, acting out the stories, drawing how they imagine the characters to be, singing, dancing and joining in, stimulating their creative senses. They can be enjoyed by children aged 3 to 7 and are of great enjoyment to the blind. They can also be a useful learning tool for children with impaired vision or vision disabilities. One of the things that makes our audio stories special from others you may have heard, is the strong themed, original classical music behind the narration. Unlike other audio books, the music continues throughout and is an essential part of the stories. We combine cartoon style voices with Sound Effects to create movement in the sound and instill positive messages in each story.

During our years in the publishing field, so far, we have worked with actors and musicians including the Olivier nominated actor Paul Kaye - The original Mr Wormwood in the award winning West End hit musical Matilda as well as appearing in many TV and film roles such as Franky Wilde in the award winning 'It's all gone Pete Tong' and is currently in the new series of Game of Thrones and Tom Meadows - who can be found touring the world drumming for some of today's biggest artists such as Kylie Minogue.

We have a very unique website with behind the scenes video footage which no other audio book makers have done before and have just released two new stories, available on Amazon and iTunes. We also have a Free Download of March of The Ants, our first story, available on our website here: musicaudiostories
What's more, our Music Audio Stories are affordable. We only price them at 79p on iTunes and £1.09 on Amazon each.

Make your purchase today. We look forward to making learning easy and fun for your children.

Stories Available
March of The Ants (FREE download) 

Chris the Caterpillar

Johnny No Cash

Jimi & his friend Joe

The Big Apple

Music Audio Stories
By Busy Bees Publishing

Stories Narrated by Anna-Christina
Author Anna-Christina
Composed by Anna-Christina/Adie Hardy
Produced by Anna-Christina/Adie Hardy


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14 February 2014

Top 10 Books for Valentine's Day

Each book for Valentine's Day is worth buying because it can be enjoyed again and again. These Valentine's books are good reads. They will transport you to a new world and provide you positive memories that you can never forget. Some of the books, that I've read like six years ago are still planted on my heart like a tattoo.Their events keep coming back to me like they took place in real life. Here's a quick look at each of them.

1. Cat's Patient Heart
 Cat’s Patient Heart is by Lee Ann Sontheimer Murphy. She dreamed of marrying Connor Donavan as a little girl but as a teenager, he broke her heart.  Ten years later and far from their hometown, Catherine has become a nurse. One snowy evening she finds a new patient – Connor.  As he recovers from an accident, their old feelings return as the sparks fly.  Catherine, Connor’s ‘Cat’, realizes she still loves him and believes he loves her too.  But when he recuperates at her home, his real life intrudes into their idyll and changes everything.  Connor leaves again, Cat stays behind….until a message sends her speeding to Kansas City and Connor’s nightclub on Valentine’s Day!
Buy link:  Amazon UK Amazon DOT COM






2. La Cucina: A Novel of Rapture
La Cucina: A Novel of Rapture is by Lily Proir.
Since childhood, Rosa Fiore -- daughter of a sultry Sicilian matriarch and her hapless husband -- found solace in her family's kitchen. La Cucina, the heart of the family's lush estate, was a place where generations of Fiore women prepared sumptuous feasts and where the drama of extended family life was played out around the age-old table.
When Rosa was a teenager, her own cooking became the stuff of legend in this small community that takes pride in the bounty of its landscape and the eccentricity of its inhabitants. Rosa's infatuation with culinary arts was rivaled only by her passion for a young man, Bartolomeo, who, unfortunately, belonged to another. After their love affair ended in tragedy, Rosa retreated first into her kitchen and then into solitude, as a librarian in Palermo. There she stayed for decades, growing corpulent on her succulent dishes, resigned to a loveless life.
Then, one day, she meets the mysterious chef, known only is I'Inglese, whose research on the heritage of Sicilian cuisine leads him to Rosa's library, and into her heart. They share one sublime summer of discovery, during which I'lnglese awakens the power of Rosa's sensuality, and together they reach new heights of culinary passion. When I'Inglese suddenly vanishes, Rosa returns home to the farm to grieve for the loss of her second love. In the comfort of familiar surroundings, among her, growing family, she discovers the truth about her loved ones and finds her life transformed once more by the magic of her cherished Cucina.
Exuberant and touching, La Cucina is a magical evocation of lifes mysterious seasons and the treasures found in each one. It celebrates family, food, passion, and the eternal rapture of romance.
Buy link: Amazon

3. It Ain't Easy Being Jazzy
 It Ain't Easy Being Jazzy is by Quanie Miller.

Jazzy secretly wants to get back together with her ex-boyfriend, Curtis, so when he calls and reveals that he’s got something important to tell her, she’s got no idea that he’s about to propose—to her first cousin and bitter rival, Mercedes.
The annual family dinner is coming up, and fearing that she will spend the evening seething while Mercedes flaunts her four carat engagement ring in her face, Jazzy asks Reggie, an Adonis she met at the mall, to accompany her. As fate would have it, not only did Reggie and Mercedes used to date; that backstabbing, leopard print wearing cow is still carrying a torch for him! Revenge. It’s never been so sweet.
But falling for Reggie? Holy crap! That wasn’t part of the plan! She’s got enough on her plate as it is; restaurant shootouts, a neurotic boss, a mother who spies on the neighbors, and a sister and best friend with man problems that could land them on Jerry Springer. Who has time to fall in love? So when Curtis comes sniffing around again—this time, with an accusation that sends her blood pressure shooting through the roof—the one good nerve that Jazzy’s got left has just about run its course.
Buy link: Amazon  
4. Way Out of Line                              
Way Out of Line by Trish Jackson.
Two Kids from Texas--a sizzling romance--one stupid mistake. Intrigue, terror and undying love culminate in the vast African wilderness.
Trent lied about her age. Hal was convicted of statutory rape. Two lives, ruined. Despite a brutal existence in prison, a desperate escape and a chance for a new life in Africa, Hal never forgets his first love. If only there were some way he could return home and find Trent but he is an escaped felon, and to be caught is to go back to prison. Trent can't forget Hal, nor can she forgive herself for his fate and she seeks solace and expiation in a dangerous cult until she is kidnapped by a ruthless quasi-military group who hold her in their remote African headquarters until her ransom is paid. Hal and Demetrio mount a rescue mission and head into the wilderness. At the end of their quest is violence, death, and--just perhaps--another chance for Hal and Trent, whose love has never died.

5. The Way Up
The Way Up is by Ward Jones. Emotional, painful and often sensual, The Way Up follows the trials and tribulations of John Howard, a 26-year-old law school graduate who works through family tragedy, and turbulent relationships, one the stormiest is during a series of career changes. The Way Up, a journey for many in life and love.

  6. Solomon's Ring

Solomon's Ring is by Raymond Hamilton. At the highest levels of government, very mysteriously, certain members of the presidential chain of succession are found murdered. However, these murders are not your ordinary murders; the presidential cabinet members’ bodies are found in a mummified condition—like they have been ceremonially prepared and entombed, by ancient Egyptians, for a thousand years. For this to have occurred overnight is a complete mystery and complicates the investigation for FBI Agent Robert Cole.

Government leaders fearful that this may be the work of foreign terrorists dispatch CIA Agent Amir Bloomberg to assist Agent Cole with the mysterious case.

Agents Cole and Bloomberg soon find themselves in a race against a powerful supernatural entity stalking government leaders, sophisticated terrorists on the verge of creating a powerful weapon, and time to uncover the truth before the unspeakable happens and changes the world forever.

Buy link: Amazon  

7. This Morning I Woke Up Dead

 This Morning I Woke Up Dead is by Mindy Larson.

What would you do? What rules would you break to be with your soul mate? This morning Hadley Christensen and Dominic Morris woke up living their dream lives. They are engaged and each has promising careers in the  medical field. They are happier and more fulfilled than they have ever been, and they are ready to begin their happily ever after.

Sadly, on her way to work, Hadley is in an accident. Before taking her last breath, she realizes she is already dead - and everyone on Earth is too. Now Hadley and Dominic must each find a way to live without one another. How do they continue when they are two parts of one flame?

Hadley is given permission by the Masters to contact Dominic in the hopes he will also realize he is already dead. If Dominic can open his mind to hear Hadley they can be together forever. Is Dominic ready to give up life the way he knows it?
8. Before I Fall
Before I Fall is by Lauren Oliver. With this stunning debut novel, New York Times bestselling author Lauren Oliver emerged as one of today's foremost authors of young adult fiction. Like Jay Asher's Thirteen Reasons Why and Gayle Forman's If I Stay, Before I Fall raises thought-provoking questions about love, death, and how one person's life can affect so many others.For popular high school senior Samantha Kingston, February 12—"Cupid Day"—should be one big party, a day of valentines and roses and the privileges that come with being at the top of the social pyramid. And it is…until she dies in a terrible accident that night.
However, she still wakes up the next morning. In fact, Sam lives the last day of her life seven times, until she realizes that by making even the slightest changes, she may hold more power than she ever imagined. Amazon buy link



9. Pride and Prejudice
Pride and Prejudice is by Jane Austen. This is a 19th century England romantic story of the rebellious Elizabeth Bennet, a strong-willed young woman and Mr. Darcy, a mysterious and arrogant wealthy man. Her unwillingness to marry him threatens the future of her family. The book was first published in 1813.
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10.  Why We Broke Up

Why Broke up is by Daniel Handler and Maira Kalman. I'm telling you why we broke up, Ed. I'm writing it in this letter, the whole truth of why it happened.

Min Green and Ed Slaterton are breaking up, so Min is writing Ed a letter and giving him a box. Inside the box is why they broke up. Two bottle caps, a movie ticket, a folded note, a box of matches, a protractor, books, a toy truck, a pair of ugly earrings, a comb from a motel room, and every other item collected over the course of a giddy, intimate, heartbreaking relationship. Item after item is illustrated and accounted for, and then the box, like a girlfriend, will be dumped.

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10 February 2014

Novel Profile-Raising: Graffiti Grandma | Jo Barney

As a writer, I will say, don't be afraid of the blank page. Just write. You can edit your mistakes later. Don't make creative process mechanical, but organically.I urge you to learn the craft of writing and suggests networking with writer groups as a powerful tool. Attend workshops and conferences whenever possible and read books suggested by the group. It is another Novel Profile-Raising on the blog. Enjoy reading!!

D.O: Welcome Jo Barney.

JO: Hello!  Thanks for having me!

D.O: Don't mention, please.

D.O: What type of books do you write?

JO: My books are novels, several are what I call “Women’s Contemporary” and this last one is a thriller.  All have feminine protagonists in the midst of change:  job, marriage, aging, loss.  Each in her own way discovers that she it capable of dealing with change and in fact, she herself is changing in the process.

D.O: Is Graffiti Grandma your first book?

JO: No, I have written three others and am finishing a fifth this month.  The last three books, The Solarium, Graffiti Grandma, and the untitled one are or will be self-published as ebooks and paperbacks. The first two are “practice” novels and may remain in a folder on my computer. But I do like them and may some day rescue them from my private slush pile.

D.O: What is it about, tell us shortly?

JO:Ellie, a cranky  old woman who cleans graffiti off her neighborhood’s mail boxes meets Sarah, a street kid in punk garb, on a street corner.  They have nothing in common except that they each have lost a family. Neither imagines that she will soon be making her way through the town’s forest, looking for the serial killer whose victims are homeless teenagers spending time in the park nearby.  Each nearly dies in the effort.  Seems strange but the theme of this novel centers on our universal need, no matter who we are, even serial killlers, for family, either the one we have or the one we create.

D.O: What inspired you to write it?

JO:I  disliked the tagging and graffiti on my neighborhood’s mailboxes so much that I went out with remover and scrapers every couple of weeks and removed it from the eight or so boxes in in the area.  Scrubbing away, I had time to imagine what would happen if one of the kids who probably did the tagging came up and tried to talk to me. Ellie fleshed out from that thought, as did Sarah, Jeffrey, a five-year-old who grows up to become a psychopath, and Matt, a policeman with a autistic child. I did quite a bit of research for the book:  the drugs, homelessness runaway youth, crime.  As a former school counselor, I knew a few kids like the ones I wrote about in Graffiti Grandma. I guess I can say that the inspiration came out of my own experiences with graffiti and with teenagers.  I have never experienced a serial killer, though.

D.O: How does it feel to be published author on a right foot?

JO: The “right foot” became evident when Graffiti Grandma received starred reviews from Publishers Weekly and Kirkus, two well-known review publications.  Then Kirkus named Graffiti Grandma to its 100 Best Books of 2013 and this recognition has been very gratifying. It is difficult for an author to know how others will respond to what she has created, and I am pleased with the positive response the book has received.

D.O: Are you a mainstream author, an independent author or a self-published author?

JO: I have had shorter pieces published in journals and magazines and when it became evident that finding an agent was going to be difficult, I decided to self-publish. The process is exciting and creative and I enjoyed it, especially opening that first box and holding Graffiti Grandma in my hand, For me, the most difficult part of self-publishing is the marketing and I work hard at it.

D.O: I wish you all the best you need to succeed in the Literary Markets.

JO:  Thank you for this opportunity to spread the word. I do appreciate it.






CHAPTER ONE

SARAH



October  2009




           We both were shivering a little in the gray morning air as we headed towards the first mailbox, me, in my black skirt and boots, Ellie in her old lady sweatshirt and red sneakers. I carried her supplies and towels stuffed in an old garbage bag like usual, and I could tell she was still mad at me, at my knowing how the graffiti got on the mailboxes. I was thinking about that, too, but she didn’t know the whole story, not then.



           “Spray!” Ellie ordered and I stopped remembering and pointed the bottle at the box in front of me. We scrubbed, Ellie not talking to me yet. After a couple of minutes, the black polish on my nails began to melt like the paint scrawls we were working on. Ellie muttered “Good,” when she saw me rubbing at them.



           As soon as the blue metal was as clean as Graffiti-X could get it, we headed towards the next mailbox. By the time we got to the street with the big trees, I was getting hot and glad for what little shade was left, the limbs above me almost bare. Orange and brown leaves crunched under my feet.



            Rich people lived in these apartments. I could tell by the doors, polished brass knobs, and the pots of flowers beside them. They probably sat on their upstairs terraces and felt like they were living in the arms of the trees. I was imagining eating breakfast four stories up and feeding a squirrel a piece of pancake when I stumbled and heard the heel of my boot snap. Shit, my only shoes was my first thought. I picked up the broken piece and had to walk like a cripple, one leg short, one long.



           “Take ‘em off!” Ellie said, shaking her gray head at me. “Stupid to wear boots like that; you look like a baby hooker.” She took the bag of supplies from me and I leaned against a tree and bent down and yanked. The cold from the sidewalk seeped through the leaves and into my toes. Ellie’s disgusted frown told me not to complain, so I shoved the boots into the bag. Maybe I could get the heel fixed somewhere.



           She marched ahead, not waiting up for me, calling over her shoulder, “We’ll finish up with the next box. When we get back you can borrow a pair of my old sneakers.”



           I watched where I was going, hoping I wouldn’t step on dog poop or something yucky hidden under the leaves. That’s when I saw the white basketball shoe sticking up from a pile of leaves at the curb. Someone must have lost it. Except that the shoe also had a sock in it. And in the sock, a leg.



           I grabbed Ellie’s arm and pointed. She looked back, made a sound like she was choking, whispered ”Oh no,” and shut her eyes.



           Without thinking, I made my way to the gutter and pushed sticks and leaves away from the rest of the leg. Familiar, worn denim jeans appeared. Then I recognized a plaid patch on a thigh and a hand with a small ink tattoo of a smiley face at the wrist. I was bawling by the time I uncovered his head, brushed bits of dirt from his eyes, understood that he was dead. Peter.



           Ellie came close and leaned over me, her words sharp as broken glass. “Leave him! Not our business.” She pulled me upright and, sobbing, I shoved at her against the trunk of a tree. “It’s trouble!” She reached for me again. “Nothing good ever comes from a dead body.”



           She dragged me away from Peter through a tear-blurred trail of leaves. “I’ll call 911,” she said. “When we get home. Anonymous.”



           And she did and now I’m lying here half alive in this hospital bed, wires and tubes beeping and bubbling, hoping she’s not dead somewhere....  

REVIEWS

Kirkus Reviews:  Ostensibly about a serial killer, Barney’s (The Solarium, 2011, etc.) novel is about much more than that. It’s also the story of people who are down but not out and a rumination on family, courage and responsibility—a book that reverberates long after the last page.    (3/11/2013)

Publishers Weekly review:  Barney weaves a multifaceted narrative with quick shifts in time and focus to show how flawed individuals overcome, or are destroyed by, failed relationships. The destructive impact of alcohol, drugs, and sexual abuse on children is abundantly displayed—and made stronger by the absence of graphic or exploitative portrayals. . .The grim, understated scenes of young people coping with the seamy side of life ensure that this is no lighthearted read, and Barney's convincing portrayal of ambivalent teen psychology. . .  provides a powerful glimpse of an underground world unknown to many, whose inhabitants are capable of transformation through love and acceptance. (3/1/2013)

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31 January 2014

Author Spotlight: Sarah Baethge | Radiant Shadows


In the Authors' Curtilage, Author's Spotlight feature, I will be focusing on different authors who has stood the test of time or a new author destined to be a future classic. This section of author spotlight is designed to give introduction to readers who have always been tempted to try a certain author, but are unsure about where to start. I hope it will give you all the inspiration necessary to embark upon a new reading adventure, and take you into a whole new universe!  










With a new novel out of the writer's birth canal, Sarah Baethge is seeking a lot of attention.



Who is Sarah Baethge?


Sarah is a 31 year old woman who has lived in Texas and Louisiana for her entire life. She was going to college on a National Merit Scholarship until she was caught in a car wreck in 2000 that left her in a coma for 6 months. Now she lives on a donkey ranch with her father, stepmother and stepsister. She writes sci-fi/fantasy stories on her computer nearly daily, she is seeking an agent for a six months book series in which she currently have one book written.


What is the title of this book which is finding its way into the mainstream market?


Radiant Shadows

 

 











 







Sarah Baethge


Format available 

Kindle-eBook 

What is the Publication date?


Sarah says:

Amazon says January 27th even though I didn't hit the KDP publish button until the 28th. 



Author links 

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Sarah Baethge Amazon page 

Publisher Updates















Hi friends, not sooner, do I wish to start helping with info from publishers currently accepting books. But because, of the author Sarah Baethge, whose book I'm featuring today, I've decided to share this information with all of you. She is presently seeking an agent for a six book series in which she currently have one book written.

This might be of help to Sarah, and to anyone of you also. Jaime Martinez has been a darling, linking me to Brian Grove. 


Lowa based Port Yonder Press are accepting fiction submissions during February. So now's your chance if you think your work might fit what they are looking for, have a look around their website: Port Yonder Press 


Peepal Tree Press Ltd are a small independent UK based publisher of Caribbean and black British literature - fiction, poetry, literary criticism, memoirs and historical studies. Peepal Tree Press rarely pays advances, but are a royalty paying traditional publisher. Have a look at their website. Submission details are here:  Peepal Tree Press Ltd 


Jasper Joffe of London, UK, based publisher Joffe Books are looking for "great new fiction authors", and are open for submissions. Joffe Books pays royalties based on a percentage of sales, and never asks its authors for up-front payments. Take a look at their website here: Jasper Joffe of London, UK

and see if your work might suit.


Lerner Publishing Group. Lerner is one of the largest independently owned children's book publishers in the USA, with a number of imprints and a backlist of over 5000 titles. The company publishes several children's fiction and non-fiction genres (see their website for details) and will consider relevant work submitted in accordance with their guidelines. Andrew assures me Lerner Publishing Group is a traditional publisher. They pay advances and royalties, and never ask authors for money. Details here:  Lerner Publishing Group


Brian Grove is the one with the direct contact with these publishers. He has put together a quick and easy guide to teach you how to approach publishers correctly and secure a book deal.
Have a look at it here and in particular his 75% discount offer today, also some free personal coaching/mentoring from him.
 



27 January 2014

Your Story Protagonist

"Use Grammarly's plagiarism detection feature because [insert clever/funny reason here]." (e.g. "copy-cats are not nearly as cute as the original!")

Before you sit down to write a screenplay or a novel, you need to come up with a story. What is story? Story is how your idea is developed through the use of character, words and action. There are two story lines, approaches to help you avoid the one-dimensional pitfall most common with creating a story. And that's the purpose of posting this article today.

• Outer Motivation

•Inner Motivation

Outer and Inner Motivation are extremely important to a story entertainment and thematic value.

To achieve this balance in your writing, the main character, or protagonist of your story, must be involved in 'two story lines'. One story will deal with his/ or her inner motivation. The inner and the outer stories are fleshed out through conflict and theme. Let's take a look at the two elements.

Story

Stories which focus a lot on action seem to be petty, while those that focus a lot on character seems to be lifeless. The finest stories avoid the pitfall with story creation by developing clearly defined action and realistic, rounded characters.

Outer Motivation

The term OUTER MOTIVATION is commonly used because the goal of your protagonist is outwardly apparent to the audience as they watch the action on the screen or read a novel.  In other words, outer motivation does not involve the desire for invisible, inner qualities. The outer motivation is about the protagonist clear goal. It is important for the protagonist because it gives the story direction and purpose. This goal must be solid and manifests itself in physical action of the protagonist. It must be clear to the audience. The outer motivation is resolved when the protagonist succeeds or fails at achieving his / or her goal.

The outer motivation provides most of your story entertainment value. It moves it forward by keeping the audience expectant of the story outcome. Without a solid outer motivation, there is miniature motion and the outcome is a dull story.

In the Wizard of Oz, for example, the outer motivation of the lead character was to get back home before he changes to stay back and protect a woman he met.
Your Protagonist desire must have a clearly implied endpoint.

Not only do we see the protagonist pursue the goal throughout movies and novels, we can easily imagine what achieving the goal will look like. We know when we watch Con Air that we will ultimately see a showdown between the hero and the villain. We may not know all the details, or exactly where and how it will occur, but we know that the outcome will resolve the story.

When you write a screenplay or a novel, you are taking the readers on a journey. But this isn’t one of those trips where you jump in the car and say, “Let’s just go for a drive and see where we end up.” In a story creation, you are subconsciously telling the audience, “I’m taking you to this specific destination. I won’t tell you all the roadblocks we’ll encounter, or all the sights you’ll see along the way, but I promise that when the story is over, you’ll be here.”

Think of your story as a race. Your protagonist is trying desperately to reach the finish line before some other character or force of nature can stop him / or her. If you don’t tell audience where the finish line is, how will they know what to root for? How will they even know when the story is over? (Yes, I know the credits will come on, but how exciting is that?)

Your Protagonist must actively pursue his goal.

Your story characters can’t simply sit around talking about how much they’d like to have money, success, or the love of a beautiful woman. They must take control of their lives and use every ounce of strength, courage and intelligence they have to rob the bank, stop the serial killer, or win the love of the prom queen.

Nor can your protagonist simply watch other characters pursue a goal, or allow others to pursue them without reacting. By definition, the protagonist is the character whose desire defines the plot of the story.

Passive protagonists destroy interest and emotion. How can we root for someone who takes no action? Your protagonist can be passive at the beginning of your story, but before too long, he / or she has to declare, “I WANT THAT!” and go after the goal.

As a writer always have it at the back of your mind that the outer motivation is about a solid physical goal that must manifests itself in the actions of your protagonist



Inner Motivation

Inner motivation is about the protagonist's inner need, that is flaws. It is not fully identified by the protagonist despite the fact that it rules the negative way he treats himself and the people that care about him. The inner motivation of your protagonist can have envy, lack of dignity, selfishness, etc. And it is resolved when the protagonist identifies and overcomes it.

How do you distinguish outer motivation from some of your protagonist inner desires and get the audience involved in the two story lines?

In my upcoming novella The Seamstress Daughter, a heartbroken mother wants to get revenge (invisible) on the rival of her late daughter for snatching her husband and killing her and her baby. This instills in this woman a visible desire to destroy the rival. It is destroying this rival that drives the story forward, gives it a clearly defined endpoint, and keeps the audience emotionally involved.

The inner motivation is usually caused by a traumatic experience in the protagonist past. It is ultimately about relationships. It is how character and theme are explored. In my screenplay And There is Blood, Victoria's inner story is about her transformation into a heartless killer, killing her offender, family members and the cops.   

The inner story is about a character flaw relationships and theme

Your Protagonist must put everything on the line to achieve the desire

Again, the more passionate, determined and courageous your protagonist is in pursuit of his / or her quest, the greater the audience’s own emotional involvement, and the greater their elation when he succeeds.

This principle is fairly evident in action movies and thrillers like Terminator 3, X Men 2, or Panic Room, where heroes put their lives on the line to save the world, stop the bad guys or escape from danger. But it’s also true in any successful love story or comedy. The Robin Williams character in The Birdcage risks embarrassment, humiliation, self-esteem, the loss of his lover and the loss of his own son’s love and happiness in his attempt to convince his future in-laws that he’s a straight man.

And in romantic comedies and love stories like Sleepless In Seattle, Good Will Hunting, and As Good As It Gets, the protagonists must take the greatest emotional risk of all: exposing themselves to rejection, fear and pain as they let go of identities that have brought them a lifetime of protection. But they find the courage to put everything on the line as they pursue their love and their destiny.

Your protagonist’s desire must be resolved at the climax of your story

You may add ambiguous elements to your story, and even leave your protagonist with an uncertain future. But you must resolve both the Outer and Inner Motivations by the end of the story be it screenplay or novel. Your readers and audience have spent two hours rooting for your protagonist to achieve these compelling desires. You can’t now leave them hanging and expect your script/novel to either advance your career or transform your audience.

So if you have been brewing a story in your head for a long time, consider these two elements (outer and inner motivation).

As you pour out the words onto the pages to begin developing your story, keep your protagonist outward goal and flaws in mind. Ask your protagonist what he wants to achieve so badly, what is his flaws, and what was it in the past that caused it. This gives you a direction to write a complex character.

Conclusion

Go out there and rent three movies. With your paper and pen with you, sit down to watch. As you watch the movies one by one pay close attention to the lead characters outward goals and flaws. Note how the writers achieved their protagonists' goals and resolved their flaws. If given the effort to this approach, by far, you will have better understanding of this powerful elements and it will take you to a better story.

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24 January 2014

Lateral Thinking


"Use Grammarly's plagiarism detection feature because [insert clever/funny reason here]." (e.g. "copy-cats are not nearly as cute as the original!")





Often times when I'm introduced to some people as a creative writer, the next thing they ask me after sharing pleasantries with them, is how do you do it? How do you know you can write? Can you teach me how to write? And so on and so forth. Well, before you can be taught how to write professionally, if you are not so talented, you must know how to generate ideas. What makes a difference between writers and the other people is that we know when we are getting ideas and how to generate one. Now, the topic I'm going to talk about do not only work for people who have problems stimulating ideas, but also works fine for writers suffering from writers' block.

Besides brainstorming, lateral thinking is another powerful way to stimulate creativity. This approach involves taking an unorthodox or seemingly illogical approach to generating ideas and solving problems. There are lots of ways to go about this, with the more common approaches I'll touch in this article.

Lateral thinking is taking an unorthodox approach to generating ideas and solving problems.

1. "Is Not"

Talented or not, once you have it in mind that you want to write a story, there is an idea on your mind. The problem here is that you feel your idea isn't good enough. So an interesting way to stimulate better and new ideas is to determine what your idea "is not" about. For example, when trying to decide the objectives of a story, an idea or a scene you are about to churn out, it will be helpful to list what the story, concept, or scene is not about. This for sure will get your creative juices flowing and help you crystallize the true objective of your concept.

2. Change Perspective

Changing perspective of an idea or problem is another way to stimulate the flow of ideas. There are lots of ways to do this. Let's say you already scrawled out your story idea: change the location of the story, change the time frame, change the outcome, and change the meaning of the outcome (i.e., turn a victory into defeat or verse verse). You may require a separate brainstorming session simply to determine how you can change the perspective of your idea.

3. "What If"

This is a technique used by actors to determine different ways to play a scene. It is a fun approach that can be used for stimulating creative though. First, state the problem that you are trying to solve, a desired story you wish to achieve. Next, determine what will happen if you change certain variables with your concept. Let's check out these few examples:

1. A cinematographer might ask "what if" the lighting source for the romance scene in the bedroom is theoretical light coming from outside rather than lighting the room within.

2. A screenwriter or novelist might ask "what if" the murderer turned out to be the protagonist's father or brother.

3. A Director might ask "what if" the audience is given information that the protagonist is unaware of.

These are just a few simple examples, but you can see how they can radically change the outcome of a material. There is more to optimizing the power of your mind to become a creative writer and, catching ideas when they pop. If you wish to try your hands on writing or wants to brush up the knowledge you already obtain on the field, consider taking a private mentoring with me, or purchase a creative course online.

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03 January 2014

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Glamour | The Darmie Orem Quote





Though to early or ripe death I easily may lose my earthly appeal, rebuke not the building of my physical manifestation, and stop not my hewing out of the five rewards of beauty:

Love

Lust

Hatred

Friendship

Style.







For by controlling the quality of the alluring beauty is not how my chance of the abode of God is limited. But grace and conducts that conform to an accepted standard of right and wrong of The Most High delivers the paradisaical relief after the vigorous fight through the narrow scrutiny road. - Darmie Orem